Tuesday, January 31, 2012


     I am going to try writing everyday. I have a habit of starting thing's and never finishing (it's a curse). I will post some of my writing's and projects.
     I started a story a while back but it was too cliche to continue, before that though I started working on the sequel. The 'sequel' is more of a short story than anything. It's 16 pages and way better than the original story. Here is an excerpt.

She's my queen.

      “Sir, I know should hold my tounge but..It's been almost six's months do not you think that maybe she is..umm.. have you thought that she might possibly be...” The young man stopped unable to say the word that left a bitter taste on his tounge. He thought about the possibilty of the new to-be Queen dead and found it horrid. When she had first come to stay at the masion he felt nothing but hatred for her. She was supposed to be the queen of a vampire kingdom. A human child only 17. The thought at first made him laugh but as he got to know her he came to love her. Everyone whom she met loved her. Maybe that is what got her in this position.
     “Dead?” The young man looked up at the Prince. That was a mistake. “You were right. You should hold your tounge...and swollow it.” The Prince said disgusted that the young soldier would ever even consider that idea.
     “Sorry Sir. I meant no harm. It's just...” The young gaurd stopped unable to even finish the sentence. If they were to find the young to-be Queen dead the Prince would fall apart. Along with the prince the kingdom would be in turmoil. The Prince's older brother would have to take the place as king, if ever the king steps aside or dies.
     “If you meant no harm talk not about it. She is alive.” His hand went up to touch a heart shapped locket that sat on his neck. It was too small for his neck but it was just the right size for his beloved. It was the only thing that was left behind. “I can feel her.” The prince said softly slowly drifting into his thoughts. “She's alive. He wouldn't have killed her. He wants her alive.” The words were meant for himself, he was trying to convince himself.
     Both, the young guard and the Prince's thoughts slowly drifted away to that night.
* * *
     “What are you doing here?” The second youngest Princess asked her younger brother. Sitting in the middle of the living room on the couch and chairs were all the heirs to the thrown; three Princesses and three Princes. The looked up at him smiling from ear to ear, knowingly.
     “Looking for mom and dad.” The prince said smiling.
     Everyone nodded their head. “Where's Alexandra?” She asked unable to stop the giggle that came after.
     “Asleep.” He laughed and ran a hand throw his hair.
     Again, everybody nodded their head. “So....” She waited for her brother to tell the news but he didn't say anything. If he were human his face would be red. “Is she going to marry you?” She half screamed unable to hid the enthusium anymore.
     The Prince looked at her unsurprised and laughed. “Yes.” He laughed. Then in the blink of an eye his siblings where surrounding him with hugs and kisses congraulationg him. The marrage had been a sort of arranged marriage so when the Prince and young Alexandra, the soon-to-be Queen, meet again after 6 years and she didn't like him everyone thought it would be a failier. To everyone's astonishment the Prince and Alexandra grew close.
     Of course there was an unforseen misdirection when the King, Queen and the heirs found out she had already previously dated a vampire. The vampire was none other than Lord Damin, the Prince's best friend. Much to the Prince's dismay neither of them were over eachother, atleast not fully. The Queen had decided that Alexandra must choose between the Prince and Lord Damin. Which is why the marriage was a huge suprise for the Royal family.

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